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Point of View concern

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Can we have a less pro-British stance? This article feels like an imperial Briths propaganda piece.

Because it is.83.240.20.46 (talk) 18:01, 24 May 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Towards a NPOV

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The word "Fortunately" starting last sentence in third paragraph could be removed. "a total of no less than" (4th paragraph) suggests that the invading force was doing a "jolly good job". "unexampled" (second sentence, para 5) also is pro-Brit. "the scourge of the country" sounds like a Soviet / USA description of Afghanistan. "valuable and curious loot and property" suggests the legality of the looting. "fortitude and courage" - forget it ! (if you can). "punish" near the end sounds like burning-bush-talk. So much for the way this article is expressed. As for content, I am informed that "Burmese Days:New York:Harper & Brothers,1934" by George Orwell gives a non-vicious background account of this. I have ordered a copy and will get back here when more enlightened. 81.250.200.198 14:12, 15 September 2005 (UTC)[reply]

George Orwell isn't a trustworthy source for the history of Burma. His book is an overtly political work. He was never a historian of Burma and his personal observations are decades out of date with the actual war.

Stiff Upper Lip rules OK

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"Burmese Days" provides no historical details of this, or any other Burmese war. It does however explain how the Brits obliged each other to stick to the "cause", and is an excellent study in the delusion of racial superiorty. Why, therefore, any British account of these and similar events takes the tone of this Encyclopedia BRITannica extract. Perhaps the sources of the En. Brit. article could be used to compile a more NPOV version. In a way, it could be a shame to "correct" the present article, providing a link to it, for curiosity purposes. It's like an old teapot, or someone like Peter Sellers doing a "colonial" number. Orwell's work can be consulted here : [[1]]. 83.195.44.61 20:07, 19 September 2005 (UTC)[reply]

Burma Cops It

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Also, see "Shooting an Elephant" by Orwell, for a further illustration of colonialism. 81.250.134.250 00:04, 24 September 2005 (UTC)[reply]

BTW, I'm computer literate, but a web newbie, and I dont understand why these three things I've posted here, each followed by four (4) tildes, gives a different numerical address (in red) each time. Help ! "loony@altern.org"

You need to [[create an account and log in. The numbers are your (temporary) IP address. --Henrygb 23:09, 27 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Fair use rationale for Image:-Burma1885peacockfeltflag2.jpg

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BetacommandBot (talk) 06:57, 1 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Added images, needs more neutral text

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I've added a number of images to the page. It, however, needs to be written more neutrally. I've taken only a very cursory look at it, but it has the style of an old-fashioned imperial history. Doesn't work in 2008. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 21:37, 2 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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Text from Encyclopedia Britannica

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hooper

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hallo, a brief visit from the german wikipedia. i wrote the article about willoughby wallace hooper yesterday and wonder why there's no article about him here, in the english wikipedia. hooper is mentioned in this article four times, and his role as a photographer in "hindustan" and the burmese war was significant. Maximilian (talk) 19:25, 29 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Article Review

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After reading this article, I have come to notice the that this article has a lack of reliable sources. The sources in this article are primarily from encyclopedias which is not reliable. However, if the information in this article can be proven as facts, then it will be a good article. For example, in the second paragraph of the section titled "The War" two citations were to encyclopedia articles. This is not very good sourcing but he is what is good about this article:

Lead

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The lead has a great start for a reader to understand what the article is about. However, it left out information about Kinwun Mingyi U Kuang. It should include information about him because he is such an important factor for the end of the Konbuang dynasty.

Balanced coverage

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The article has a balance of the background of the war, the war itself, and the aftermath of the war. It has a decent coverage of the events of the war.

Clear Structure

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The article follows a contents box which displays the structure of the article.

The article has many flaws about it also. Here are some flaws:

Content is not neutral

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The content in this article is biased to British colonial view points.

I agree with this comment. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 146.200.201.66 (talk) 08:36, 15 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Sourcing

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The sourcing in this article is not great. The article consist of some bare URLS which are bad citations because the website may change at any time which may lead to not knowing what was cited for the article.

The Article will be better if these problems become omitted.Makaveli334 (talk) 17:00, 24 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]